DISCUSSION
Discussion is
a text to inform something points of view about an issue in around us.
Social Function
To present ( at least)
two points of view about and issue
Text Structure
Issue
Statement
Preview
Arguments for and
against or statement of differing points of view
Point
Elaboration
Conclusion or
Recommendations
Significant Lexicogammatical
Features
Focus on generic human
and generic non - human participants
Use of material
processes e.g. has produced, have develop, to feed
Relational processes
e.g. is, could have, cause, are
Mental processes e.g.
feel
Use of comparative and
Consequential conjunctions
Reasoning expressed as verbs
and nouns ( abstraction)
Example
:
HANDPHONE
Lately we
are faced with the school regulation that prohibits students to bring a hand
phone in the school. This regulation is caused by the rise of misusing a hand
phone which facilitates communication, but with a massive development in
technology, hand phone turns to be a smart phone. The prohibition of bringing
smart phone to school creates different opinion between the school and parents.
So, what is their point of view about the rules?
Student’s abusing smart phone is a
major cause of banning to bring smart phone in the school. Of course we still
remember the spread of immoral video of junior high children recorded in the
classroom and watched by their friends. This frightens the school. Youth is a
great imitating period. But they still cannot differentiate which is good or
bad for them. So students abuse the convenience provided by smart phone. That
is one example of the negative effects caused by smart phone.
However, not a
few people who disagree to the regulation. Some parents think that the ban of
bringing hand phone in the school is not appropriate. They argue that it makes
their children difficult to contact them or their family if there are other
activities outside. Moreover, if there is something unwanted happens, such as
accidents or kidnapping, the hand phone is very necessary. In addition, parents
are also easier to control their children when they bring hand phone.
Regardless of
the pros and cons of the rule, of course both of them have their benefits. But
it is basically backed to the individual. Certainly the role of teachers and
parents are very important in educating children’s moral and mental. So they do
not abuse the hand phone. Both sides should sit down together and determine the
proper regulation for their best.
Nice
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